Disclaimer: This is going to be a short one; just a little update on my editing. I’ve been incredibly busy lately and, although I’m not offering that as an excuse, I’d just rather do a low-impact post for this week. Not trying to teach anything–just venting.
So, I’m up to the part in Memory when one of the main characters has a nightmare.
And, when it comes to nightmares, Memory has had a strange journey.
At first, there was one nightmare that actually read like a nightmare.
But then, on future edits, I decided there should be two nightmares . . . which both wound up being edited into flashbacks.
Flashbacks, or, as they’re often called, the worst things ever.
I know that my original intention was to give the world of Memory a little more body–to show off more of the Capital of Panthius, which is seen in passing otherwise. I also wanted to give the audience time with a character who doesn’t pop up until much, much later in the story; one of my protagonists talks about her a lot, so I thought it would be good to actually show her being great instead of just talking about her being great (because, of course, I also fear what I call the Jean Grey Effect: when a character seriously never shuts the fuck up about his love interest to the point that you just . . . don’t care).
The thing is though . . . a dream flashback is kind of a double whammy. Doing a flashback in the first place is lazy story-telling, but making that flashback into a dream is also ruining the potential for a good dream.
Because dreams are awesome when they’re done well. They’re great character-building tools; dreams tell us so much about the dreamer–how they feel about themselves and others. They’re also awesome because they have the freedom to be completely bizarre.
All of which was made incredibly clear with recent viewings of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and–especially–Twin Peaks.
But, despite knowing these things . . . I’m struggling with Kole’s dream in Memory.
In part because I realize I’m over-editing; in this run, I cut out one of the dream sequences . . . meaning I’m back down to one dream, which is where I began in the first place. That’s a little exhausting, but also comforting; assurance that I’m definitely at the end of the editing cycle for this book. It’s also a lesson in trusting my instinct for pacing and the strength of minor additions (an extra paragraph here and sentence there painted enough of a picture of the world that two dreams felt superfluous).
But I’m also struggling because I don’t have a well established ensemble to play with in this dream; Memory is very much a Buddy Fantasy novel, focusing on one mismatched pair of protagonists. Doesn’t feel like there’s a lot to work with there. In fact, I’m still using this dream to visually introduce a key character. That makes the whole thing a weird pain in the ass.
But, whatever. I’m at least certain that this is the last major change I have to make to this manuscript. After this, it’s a straight shot to the end.
And the unbridled joy of submissions.
I just . . . can’t wait.
Thanks for reading. Apologies to anyone hoping for a long talk about theory, but I just don’t have the energy this week. Summer has officially kicked off here in New York and it’s already so hot that I’m dead inside–not to be dramatic. And work is just . . . really, really dominating my time (I worked six days last week, including a double shift). I’m finding it more and more difficult to get home and transition from day job to writing. But, hey, I’ll figure it out; as with everything else in my life, my drive to chip away at my WIP is, itself, a WIP.
Ladies and gentlemen, my name is Louis Santiago, and I’m a fantasy writer based in the Bronx. My short story, “Aixa the Hexcaster,” was published last year in Mirror Dance Fantasy. However, I’m still very much learning about the writing process–still trying to figure it out–which means posting here every week, even though I make absolutely no money from it. So, if you like what you read here and feel up to getting updates by email – a new post from me delivered right to your inbox – then please hit the Follow button at the bottom of this page. Because, even though all I get from this site is emotional support, that support means the world to me.
At any rate, I am now going to go allow myself to pass out. Even if you just passed by, thank you. And, as always, write well.
2 thoughts on “A Good Dream”
For a short post this really packs a punch. Very illuminating to read about your thought processes during editing. Also very timely, as I am about to start editing my second novel in the next week. Hope work eases soon, I know how frustrating it can be when you have the enthusiasm to write but not the time.
Thanks, mote. Yeah, it’s definitely frustrating to figure out how to handle a difficult scene . . . on the way to a 13 hour shift. Then you get home, pass out, wake up, go straight to work again, and realize you forgot some details of the solution. I did just got a new phone–I have to start using that thing to write wherever and whenever I can.
As always, thanks for the comment, sir. Glad you enjoyed this one.